I was running down not a room, but a dark hallway with Kamashi in my arms. At the end of the hall a door was waiting for us to open it. I burst through the door and entered a large white room. The only light in the room came from windows at almost the top of the ceiling, and dull light came through them. Wait ..how are their windows when I'm underground? Suddenly the ground shook and a dark figure appeared in the center of the room.

oh no, obviousl evil guy

This is were you're fates end. The dark figure turned to me and it started to transform. Darkness flew around the figure and made it impossible to see it. I heard a roar, and the black mass around what uses to be the dark figure shot outwards, and in its place was something horrible.

It grew as almost as high as the ceiling, and its head was a giant heart with needles jutting out all over it. Its torso was skinny, but its arms. Its arms were huge syringes, with a blood colored liquid inside of them. The legs of the monster were twisted with on another, like what you would see in a old black and white cartoon. The monster let out another roar and shot one of its syringe arms right at me.

As I turned to go back the way I came, I forgot I was still carrying Kamashi, and I accidentally let go of her and she hit the floor. I was stunned for only a second, and that is all it took for it to kill me. The needle of the syringe went right into my heart. It was sucking all my blood up, from the source of were it all came from.. As my body trashed around I tried to let out a scream, only to find out that my head was already torn from my body. The needles that were poking out of its head had grew longer and ripped my head right off. Blood sprayed everywhere. It will get Kamashi next. GAME OVER

time to make the end were its not a game over

also what do you think?

Sorry, was busy rping. This is a very nice game over, though! Pretty well-written!

IT seemed kinda sudden, but I suppose that's stuff that gets revealed on the other path

im kind of basing the bosses off of were the characters are