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Chapter 3: A Truly Royal Execution
The hallway floor and walls were checkered, with marble pillars jutting out of the ground everywhere. Its hard to see, the only light source is coming from candles on the walls. As I climbed between two pillars and continued to search for the exit.
I came to a fork in the road. I could go left or right. I think I should go right. People do say that right is right anyways. After about 10 minuets I am led to another dead end, many bars go up from the ceiling and down to the floor, I am unable to get between them so I can't continue down this path. I turn back and start walking back to the fork in the road frustrated that this prank has gone on long enough. Once I get to it I turn left.
n e w t h r e a d A castle? Can't wait to see the reason for this location~
At the end of the hallway a stair case that goes higher into this maze comes out from the ground. I start to descend up the checkered stairs, one step at a time. The walls start to close in on me more and more. Before I know it, I had emerged into a huge room that stretched high into the sky. Stairs like the ones I was just on were everywhere and leading into more hallways. "W-What the hell! This isn't even physically possible!" I scream and pulled at my hair.
screamed*
I started to run up the stairs, trying to believe that this is all some weird dream. Soon I was out of breath and was crying. I..can't give up now. I need to think of something. Something...something.... I got it! I just need to calm down and focus. I closed my eyes and tried to calm myself down. Suddenly, everything started to clear up. Everything around me started to shift back to normal. The stairs I were on started to flatten out and become a floor. The other stairs that were that were around me began to get closer to me and attached themselves to the side of the floor and began to look like walls. Before I knew it I was back in the hallway. "Was that....all just a illusion?"I said to myself. I'm so confused. I wish someone was here with me, and tell me that I'm OK.
After about thirty minuets Knight Armour lined the walls and in one of their hands they held a torch with a fire at the end it. I am so exhausted, I have been walking for hours and I still haven't found any sign of life here. Suddenly, a black tile on the floor fell down. A black hand then rose up from where the tile was and swayed back and forth. "W-What the...." I was dumbfounded. But that was for only a second until it turned into fear. Suddenly random tiles on the walls and on the floor fell and a black hand rose out of where the tile used to be. The hands swayed back and forth, back and forth, very hypnotic.
Soon, the hands stopped and just stood straight up and still. Suddenly the hands reached out at me and grabbed my arms and legs and held me up into the air. I struggled in their grasp but their grip was to strong. "LET ME GO!" I screamed and squirmed more. The hands started to pull. I let out a scream as I felt pain soar through my body. T-Their going to rip my limbs off! "N-NOOOOOOOOOOOO!" I screamed with all my might. A hand rose right in front of me, it was holding a yellow mask in its hand and turned it around and moved it towards my face.
brb cake break
back and also what do you all tihnk so far
I like it. A lot.
the stair part of the story is based off of a painting
I am a painting.
no your a sexy edgy gay
I'll allow that, but I'm still a painting.
Ina
Gr8
your a sexy nude painting?
The mask was placed onto my face..and..everything was black. The last thing I heard was... The sin of pride. I will feast upon you're sinful heart. Embrace you're fate. .... ....... ....... ... "RESONATE!" Cried a voice.
end of part one any feedback? suggestions? follow my patron jk
any feedback?
someone respond
I LIVE But looks like we have a sin motif going on in this story... and here's Pride already.
ye 7 people will die for sure