hm..........well shit, thats real gosh diddaly darn good mate...maybe if everything wasn't just thrown around, it would be better, but its still good

What do you mean by thrown around out of curiousity?

for me, it feels like you just sortta put circus related thing around [which i understand why] and just put them in place's for no apparent reason, not being rude, but, maybe rework a few things, move 'em around. and maybe put some other things on? cuz it just looks kind of empty, not being rude, just my opinion

I can understand, for me it felt a bit better than my first version because it's such was a tent with some balloons, I could try to add some stuff to it, but so far I actually kinda liked story wise for her to have a bit emptyness in the background and more dark colors taking over. Having an aura of mystery. At least that was my reason for not stuffing to much into it. Ryuji and Makoto also have not that much in theirs. ^^ That was my reason for it. And I knew you would mention that, but you were not the only one actually, someone on Discord as well.

https://i.imgur.com/DSbv3Ds.jpg This is one idea how to improve it

ay, im just giving my opinion. ya don't have to listen to it. im just mostly thinking how i would do it, for mine would be simple: me on the side [human me, or snakipede me] a giant guillotine, being thrown on the enemies, held by a snake on one side, the other?, duh, a centipede. and the words would say: Why not a challenge? the color scheme would be: backround: black axe/gulliotine: white and red at the tip snake: purple centipede: a gold-ish color and i know is simple, but mine feels like its supposed to be simple, your's? not really.

Well for my taste first of all to much balck would derange the shading of all out attacks, second how to do the guillotine so it looks right, you have to make it huge, which doesn't make sense for tons of enemies, I like the quote though. But yeah, I don't know how to make that work kinda.

But I guess that is just diffrent tastes. ^^

well, not much of a gulliotine, its more of the snake and centipede holding a giant wide axe head, and then dropping it on the dudes and gals,

I actually like how it looks, especially the background looks nice.