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Poem thing...
My patience, is just wearing out now,
As the days, start passing me, now
My brain always swirling, whirling,
As the years go by,
And absolutely nothing,
I can get done!
Even though, people have helped me out, sometimes,
As the hour hand spins,
So do my eyes,
Hey, I’ve lost myself,
All to sadness and laziness,
I’ve now messed it up, big time...
"Ah, if i could only be, just so more happy...
that’d be, okay to see, now..."
"Shall I erase the me that i hate?"
"The problem i just couldn’t solve?"
Faking, faking, my characterization!
Wait a sec, now...
Just, what the heck is this, that i see?
Revolution, new situation,
Oh, Happy, happy, happy,
With escalation!
Oh, Laughing, laughing, laughing,
With high elation!
Let’s go together!
All problems, we can meet,
I'll be your tools, your hands and your feet,
The future that is best, accepted premises!
"Isn’t that kind of cliché?"
Nonsense!
The popular kid that everyone likes,
The shining one that’s bathed in spotlight,
Hey who was the person that was liked the most?
"Wait, wasn’t that supposed to be me?"
The price of obtaining another “me,”
Is the future, future, future,
Is thrown away, see?
"Just realize, who is real now, already"
Wait..I‘m right here…. how could this be?
Faking, faking, my characterization,
Wait a sec, now,
Just what, the heck is this i see?
Broken reason, a revelation
Oh, Scary, scary, scary,
No termination!
Repent, repent?
No affirmation!
As a fake person, I’m always in a struggle,
As a fake person, I falter and I fumble

My dear god, I’m so sorry for trying to be perfectly different...
Okay... That's the whole thing.
these are pretty great, maybe you should change your name to Poetry Girl
I wish i could...
*finger snapping intensifies*
Cool poem!
I don't know poems, but even I can tell that's good. Like, wow.
I'm glad that you guys like them. I will be writing more, so i might post then here...