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It was an unusually busy day at the Hitotose Cafe. Mayu doing her best to fill the orders, and Hinako is doing her best to deliver the orders in her usual grace. At this point, poor Hinako has dropped about 3 people's orders, and passed out maybe twice. At the end of the busy day, Mayu went to Hinako’s room to confront her about the issue.

“Hina-chan, maybe it’s about time you take a break from the cafe” said Mayu looking very distraught. It was hard to tell her best friend this, especially because seeing Hinako in the cafe was always the highlight of her day.

“I’m really sorry, Mayu-senpai. I just get so nervous around people. I thought working here would help me, but I still can’t talk to anyone without acting weird or dropping something.” Hinako looked very depressed. She was rapidly losing hope of ever getting over her fear of talking to people.

Mayu had a look of excitement, but it was quite sly as well. “Hina-chan! I have an idea that might help you fix your problem.” Mayu exclaimed. Interestingly, she blushed a bit as she said this.

Hinako was intrigued. “Really? Mayu-senpai, that’s amazing! I’ll do anything if it means being able to help you in the cafe.” Hinako was filled with determination, she was ready for any challenge ahead of her in order to help her dear friend.

“Okay Hina-chan, here’s the plan. I’m going to do… something, and you have to try your best to not get nervous.” Mayu explained. Hinako looked at her in confusing, but nodded in agreement anyway.

In an instant, Mayu dived on top of Hinako, pinning her to the bed and pressing her lips against the unsuspecting kouhai’s. Hinako’s face got incredibly warm as her cheeks began to glow red. It was embarrassing, but she didn’t fight back. “M-Mayu-senpai… what are you…”

Mayu looked very pleased with herself. “I know I’m kind of throwing you in the deep end here, but if you can master this, you might finally get over your fears.” she explained.

Hinako knew this wouldn’t work. Kissing someone and talking to strangers are two completely different things, but she agreed anyway. “If it’ll really help me get over my fears… then I don’t really mind.” Hinako looked excited more than nervous. She had never kissed anyone because there weren’t a lot of people her age when she lived in the country. Having her first kiss be snatched away by her best friend was strange but exhilarating none the less.

Mayu incredibly happy. The fact the Hinako was so willing to actually kiss her was a surprise. The whole reason Mayu invited Hinako to work in her cafe in the first place was so she could watch her work everyday. She had always been too scared to confess her feelings, so she was relieved that Hinako so willingly accepted her love, she was thrilled.

With a new found love, the two girls went at it, lips and tongue danced around each other in a beautiful ballet of passion. Each kiss was meaningful and perfectly placed giving the girls a wonderful sensation. They enjoyed every moment their lips were together and were hurt when apart. They treasured each second as they shared their warmth with each other. Hinako gave her entire body to Mayu, and Mayu gave her entire body to Hinako.

Somewhere along the way, Mayu lost her maid outfit as it was restricting her movement in the bed. She left her exposed body fully open to Hinako, who didn’t hesitate to move her hands along Mayu’s perfectly smooth skin and putting those hands close to some places they probably shouldn’t belong. Mayu was motionless; she froze in ecstasy as she allowed Hinako to feel her entire body with her warm fingertips. The two lovers passionately clung to each other for who knows how long, both with pink faces and beating hearts. The girls fell in love that night, and they would never look at each other the same way ever again.

The next day, Cafe Hitotose was equally as busy. Mayu was still working hard filling orders, and Hinako was still delivering orders as usual. She was still her same nervous self, but she never messed up anything. Her work performance greatly improved. However, it wasn’t because she got over her fear of talking to people. It was because she didn’t want to let down her brand new girlfriend.

Enjoy

😊 Great work, @Mako-chan!

Rip, one person cares

I know that felling...
It's just afternoon, and people come here at night, so just wait a bit for them.

Let me bump this up!
Go!

Is there any background to the story that I'm missing?
Otherwise I'd say the reason why no one really comments on this is just like you said. It does not feature any persona and/or phansite related characters, aswell as the protagonists probably being unknown to most people.

To be honest though, fanwritten stories never really had impressive feedback here, which is a shame considering how much work it actually is to do these and how demotivating lacking appreciation can be.

You definitely have talent for this though and shouldn't let this drag you down. Keep going hard and they will have to notice you someday!

My heart

has melted

It's all goo now and I'm all lightheaded.

This made me very very happy. Thank you so much, Lady Mako-chan! You're fucking amazing!

Well she is been waiting for you, but she is probably out right now...

Bump so Lady Mako-chan can see my appreciation

Bumping again

Why.

Yuri turns me on so EFFING much.

You're not mortal at all, Mako-chan.

You need to have a brain beyond human conprehension to make stuff like this.

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


*Bows down*

Ah, glad to see this did well. Thanks for the appreciation bump AdachiImouto, unfortunately I didn't see it.